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    dots Submission Name: routinedots
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    Author: mixedemotions00
    ASL Info:    24/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 574/377/69
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
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    dotsroutinedots
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    caught in the cogs of habit,
    turned and tumbled between
    boredom and routine,
    apathy and the rare bit of
    lackluster pseudo-motivation.

    maybe i'll write a play.
    maybe i'll clean the floors.
    maybe i'll watch tv.
    maybe i'll just sleep.

    all of those unwritten plays
    scream out in still moments.
    and still,
    i sleep.




    Submitted on 2010-09-03 11:53:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This sweet and simple piece was brilliant and easy to relate to.

    When there are too many options, sometimes it's easier to do nothing.

    I really have nothing else to say to this. No complaints or nitpicks.

    It was a nice window onto one of those "I could do all this, but...." moments.

    Bye for now,
    Erin
    | Posted on 2010-09-03 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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