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    dots Submission Name: Hello Stranger.dots
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    Author: anthoula
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/0/9
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsHello Stranger.dots
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    Hello Stranger,
    my name is not worth noting,
    you don't know me.
    Let me paint you a story.

    To you, I am a silhouette,
    a shadow of a being,
    hopeless and helpless
    in a world without meaning.

    My thoughts are deep,
    I do not sleep.
    Does anyone hear my cry?

    I am pushed to the side,
    inside me is not alive,
    catagorized as another bypasser.

    Hello Stranger,
    I am Nothing, what are you?




    Submitted on 2010-09-05 00:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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