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    dots Submission Name: Destructiondots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 610
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1246



    Description:
       Ten reasons of death

    1. Old age
    2. Wrath
    3. solitude
    4. Emptiness
    5. Despair
    6. Destruction
    7. Intoxication
    8. Insanity
    9. Greed
    10. Sacrifice

    Sixth - Destruction....A sense with a sense of it's own. When love dies, the heart destroys. Death in destruction to speak of now...

    A psychotic thought of me destroying the world. Picture a missile coming down on people and they crying as they are about to die. Me slitting every throat that I see. A war has started now..for no reason at all.


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    Smile I say before I kill you,
    before I rid that lie out of your face.
    Love, I spit all around this face of mine,
    So rich in truth with life in disgrace.....

    Smile do you, now so shall I,
    Slitting your throat and all around my face.
    I see I killed you all,
    why are you quiet now that you are dead.

    Boom.....and so shall all of you die,
    in this hell I create, in this hell that I bake.
    Shout everybody as you see your doom,
    right above the sky walks death with a smile.

    Why are you crying, stop your tears,
    death is inevitable, as it is life....

    I see now, I see clear land and a clear sky,

    Created from the creator has the subject in hand.

    I truly never smile, I truly always cry,
    Cry with happiness that never existed.
    A dream of a fresh start, a dream of a new life,
    I killed them all, with the press of a button.

    I see now....I see clear land and a clear sky

    With no-one around, with blood shed around,

    Guilt I do not feel, as I do not feel at all.
    Hello anarchy, hello war, hug me now....as I kill you all....




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