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    dots Submission Name: For a fatherdots
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    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       A father's day poem I wrote up for my daddy last Father's Day :)


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    dotsFor a fatherdots
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    Every night that i take
    the time to think
    I realize how glad I am
    That you are in my life

    As a little girl you taught me
    how to stay strong and not give in,
    and you taught me to work for
    perfection in life.

    You were the one who
    stood me back on my
    feet after I fell and
    encouraged me to try again.

    You have become my guide,
    my savior, and my protector.
    II could never be more proud that
    you are my father.




    Submitted on 2010-09-05 20:18:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was good hats off to a father not all kids feel that way about there parents
    well said

    sandman
    | Posted on 2010-09-09 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is delightful, and a wonderful tribute to your father. I hope your father was able to read this!

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2010-09-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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