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    dots Submission Name: i guess Heard about my babydots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsi guess Heard about my babydots
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    I guess you heard
    about my issue
    my issue that will turn in to a angel
    an angel tht will change my life.
    My boyfriend might deny it
    deny that he is the daddy.
    the daddy that will soon leave me
    if i dont get rid of the baby.
    but what i did
    i did
    and there are no turn backs
    my baby is MY baby
    and it is my responibilty to take care of my baby.
    It around school now.
    not that i really care
    i hear people talking about it
    like im not even there.
    with being 3 months
    i will soon show.
    but my baby is my baby!!
    and i love it already




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