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    dots Submission Name: The Touch of Life in Autumndots

    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Touch of Life in Autumndots

    I've feared kissing for long long now
    Until lately,
    Whereas I care not for how "well"
    My kiss feels to her,

    Rather, she and I

    Simply kiss, lost in each other,
    Though not lost in lust
    Lost in Character
    Of the One behind the two lovers.

    She tastes like Autumn.

    Submitted on 2010-09-10 17:13:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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