Love at first sight

Author: Ramneet ASL Info:    33/F/Boston Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 272 /107 /55 Words: 104

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Love at first sight

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Beautiful eyes Million dollar smile Who’s that guy It’s Jyotsahib Lovely Boy Kuchu Guy. Tender tender skin Small small hands Small small feet Who’s that guy It’s Jyotsahib Lovely Boy Kuchu Guy. God’s benevolence Happiness of everyday Joy of our lives Who’s that guy It’s Jyotsahib Lovely Boy Kuchu Guy. Prince Charming He likes monkeys He is like a monkey Jumping all the time Who’s that guy It’s Jyotsahib Lovely Boy Kuchu Guy. Play time is fun Story time is fun Bathing time is fun World around him is fun Who’s that guy It’s Jyotsahib Lovely Boy Kuchu Guy.

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Awesome,I can imagine about jyotsahib after reading this wonderful poem about childish behaviour of lovely boy.

| Posted on 2012-01-21 00:00:00 | by jasguru | [ Reply to This ]

I think some is in love with their baby boy, which is exactly as it should be! A wonderful, wonderful and loving poem! I just loved it!!!

| Posted on 2011-06-02 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

I can picture a handsome and happy boy from your lovely poem.

| Posted on 2011-02-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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