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    dots Submission Name: Near To My Heartdots

    Author: Dawnyd
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 149/80/32
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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       I wrote this from my daughter in law's wait for my son to return home, point of view. He is in the military and is gone for extended periods of time. I know many are going through this too, it's not easy. This is a work in progress.

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    dotsNear To My Heartdots

    I Sing A Song Of Days Gone By
    How Quickly Some Fly Right By
    While Others Drag On And On
    Today I Realized, You're Really Gone

    The Days Of Summer Are Getting Shorter
    Nights Alone, They're My Torture
    Wondering, Will They Ever End?
    Wondering, Will I Ever Mend?

    Missing You, Is Nothing New
    Loving You, Is All That's True
    Trying In Vain To Stay Sane

    I Am Trying To Keep My Patience
    Wondering, What Could Save Us?

    Although, No Matter How Far Apart
    I'll Always Keep You Near My Heart

    Your Loving Embrace Is What I Yearn
    As I Eagerly Wait For Your Return
    Wondering, Will This Ever End?
    Wondering, Will I Ever Mend?

    Until Then,
    I Am Waiting,
    Until Then,
    I Am Waiting,
    Waiting For The Day,
    Waiting For The Day,
    The Day That You're Here,
    The Day You're Here,
    Holding Me Near,
    Until Then,
    I'm Holding You Near,
    Near To My Heart

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      What lovely you have penned here. A joy to read indeed.

    | Posted on 2010-10-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Indeed, a lovely song indeed. I rather enjoyed this song, it's so passionate, yet such a calm. Love is usually like this, unless something happens, but this is the good type of love.
    | Posted on 2010-09-13 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]
      This would make a lovely song. Time drags with all the pain and tedium of an illness when loved ones are away from home and in harm's way.

    Nice work Dawn!
    | Posted on 2010-09-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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