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Near To My Heart

Author: Dawnyd
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Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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I wrote this from my daughter in law's wait for my son to return home, point of view. He is in the military and is gone for extended periods of time. I know many are going through this too, it's not easy. This is a work in progress.

Near To My Heart

I Sing A Song Of Days Gone By
How Quickly Some Fly Right By
While Others Drag On And On
Today I Realized, You're Really Gone

The Days Of Summer Are Getting Shorter
Nights Alone, They're My Torture
Wondering, Will They Ever End?
Wondering, Will I Ever Mend?

Missing You, Is Nothing New
Loving You, Is All That's True
Trying In Vain To Stay Sane

I Am Trying To Keep My Patience
Wondering, What Could Save Us?

Although, No Matter How Far Apart
I'll Always Keep You Near My Heart

Your Loving Embrace Is What I Yearn
As I Eagerly Wait For Your Return
Wondering, Will This Ever End?
Wondering, Will I Ever Mend?

Until Then,
I Am Waiting,
Until Then,
I Am Waiting,
Waiting For The Day,
Waiting For The Day,
The Day That You're Here,
The Day You're Here,
Holding Me Near,
Until Then,
I'm Holding You Near,
Near To My Heart

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  What lovely you have penned here. A joy to read indeed.

| Posted on 2010-10-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  Indeed, a lovely song indeed. I rather enjoyed this song, it's so passionate, yet such a calm. Love is usually like this, unless something happens, but this is the good type of love.
| Posted on 2010-09-13 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]
  This would make a lovely song. Time drags with all the pain and tedium of an illness when loved ones are away from home and in harm's way.

Nice work Dawn!
| Posted on 2010-09-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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