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    dots Submission Name: Rose Colored Lenses For The Blind?dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 702
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsRose Colored Lenses For The Blind?dots
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    Let us put in perspective the choices we must make,
    not whether or not we choose to have cheese or diet for Christ sake.
    Am I right or is this just a misguided mistake-
    I sometimes see the sun and think of specifics-
    I know we all are -once -was -never -enough --- youth
    Blur the slurring of our brethren, they claim to hold the key to a long lost direction.
    Sit around and scoff at the television at night-
    Brain melting charity




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