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    dots Submission Name: Realizationsdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRealizationsdots
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    It's silly to think the world turns for you.
    I was naive enough to believe this for ages.
    I was perplexed by your beauty.
    I was blind enough to believe.
    I was blind enough to believe you were worthy.

    And I think you tried, once upon a time.
    I trusted that you cared.
    And you probably did for a minute.
    And I trusted you.
    And I trusted you'd be there.

    So has your heart turned cold from hardships of life?
    Do you think you're cynical on purpose?
    You've some demons to release such pain.
    Do you ever think?
    Do you ever think this will be worth it?

    I guess I forgive you, no hard feelings.
    Doubt you'd beg for forgiveness, though.
    Are you oblivious to your wickedness?
    Would you beg?
    Would you beg for an end to all the woe?

    But I will remember you, but not like you are.
    I won't forget the good side within you.
    Though I wonder if it's even real.
    I won't forget.
    I won't dismiss those memories for the truth.




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