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    dots Submission Name: the plotdots

    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       my very own scheme. "she" pushed me too far. ive been seeing how this is going to end. so i decided to bring myself some humor using the situation. this is phase one.

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    dotsthe plotdots

    watch her...

    i know how she thinks.
    she thinks i\'m stupid.
    she thinks i\'m lower than her.
    well... SHE\'S quite the idiot.

    she cries way too much,
    and expects even more.
    i can read her like a comic book.
    but putting up with her is like a chore.

    and when she realizes whats going on
    she starts to cry again, its annoying...
    and she expects straightforward answers...
    answers for her foolish imaginary fling.

    she will stare me down with a fake smile
    and i will lie to her with my own fake words.
    she deserves no truth from me.
    and she\'s only bound to get herself hurt.

    and when she turns to me again
    i will only turn and walk away, smiling.
    she was bound for this from the beginning.
    i\'m not to blame, its her stupid thinking.

    he has another, she\'s quite aware of it.
    she cries when he leaves for the phone call.
    so why the fuck does she still hope?!
    no one will catch her, when she falls...

    i will stand at a distance and watch
    i will not pity her. i will not help her.
    but i will stare at her, and i will laugh.
    it will make that anger in her burn.

    ...but only if she has it

    Submitted on 2010-09-15 07:39:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lol This is [censored] bananas Thi3v.FAV.I feel like this is talking about my situation related to the subject too.Which is a stupid woman who cant follow directions,needs help with everything,can [censored] up almost anything, does'nt listen etc.You know what I mean.You put a nice touch on this [censored] right here to get out some raw feelings of payback to make her taste dirt.Although it does'nt seems as though it's a plot to act on anything really.More like karma turning its crosshairs onto a scheming woman who gets what she deserves.I got a couple laughs too.
    | Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      wow ,,,.... --- STRONG !! / wise / poetic / its like when i read the poem (each) person has their own answers at the end -- only feining for more..


    gooood wRite ...
    | Posted on 2010-09-17 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]

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