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    dots Submission Name: Powerdots
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    Author: 13thprotector
    ASL Info:    15/male/atlanta,tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 28/23/40
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPowerdots
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    Power
    a growth
    of energy
    and rage
    or peace
    and sorrow
    perhaps
    I have
    none.

    Power
    is corruption
    is pain
    is unlimited
    or calm
    pure
    and enlightened
    I have all.




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