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    dots Submission Name: Ethicsdots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 459/207/102
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    Description:
       Honesty, loyalty, trust, fairness


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    dotsEthicsdots
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    In all sincerity, your attempt at candor comes across as very disingenuous indeed:
    Round-a-bout alibis; filler words and shifty eyes that are never direct.
    Command a believable lie, point me towards your it's the truth department.

    Your fallibility in the honest answer department, should be enough proof of your unreliability
    But why bother pledging your allegiance when your promises are as hollow as the apple-
    After the worm has taken his feast? Please, keep your faithless devotions to yourself.

    My confidence in your apple-core words is smaller than the seeds, spit from your lips
    It sounds like a stutter, But this time... And I really don't have the patience this time.
    I know your actions don't match your words, so just keep talking; I'm not listening.

    Oh, Poor lamentation! Tears fall from your eyes and your body trembles with rage-
    It's been so unjust, my treatment of you! Why will I not agree to forgive and forget?
    Just one more time, you swear, you really mean it this time. And how exactly is that fair?




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