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    dots Submission Name: facts never lie when its with lovedots
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    Author: cherrywillow
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    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsfacts never lie when its with lovedots
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    What is it like to smile into perfections view?
    What is like to hear a beautiful tune?
    What is it like to see an angel?
    What is it like to feel caressed?
    What is it like to feel loved and know it is true?

    It's being able to meet you,
    fall in love with you and be able to hear you say
    "I love you forever and always, Fact".
    Short and sweet but truly sincere
    I want nothing in this world but to have you near.
    I love you, forever and always
    and until eternity dies.
    It could never possibly be a promise
    because facts never lie.




    Submitted on 2010-09-15 19:25:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Delightful love ode! Poetic way of stating that "love is all"! I like the way your muse describes the feeling when we're in love, it consumes all mind and thought, and that one person seems to be everything.
    | Posted on 2010-09-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      love the end. great work(:
    | Posted on 2010-09-18 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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