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    dots Submission Name: im a cowarddots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    dotsim a cowarddots
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    WHAT THE FUCK?!! i was so close. i could have told her everything. why did i hold back? im a fucking coward... that's why. because im too afraid to hurt her. because im too afraid to interfere. A FUCKING COWARD!!!!!!!!!! disappointment runs through my veins. she's perfect for me. but she deserves more than a coward, and a coward deserves nothing at all. isn't that what a coward is? avoids EVERYTHING, will never be SOMETHING, and will never amount to ANYTHING, and so will always be NOTHING. if there was a title any lesser than that, it would be MY NAME. from first, to middle initial, and ended off with a my fucking last name. i dont deserve her. i only deserve what ive been having. to rot alone in this world till my death.




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