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    dots Submission Name: Sectsdots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1556/457/118
    Words: 313
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A re-post but also a pet peeve.


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    dotsSectsdots
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    we servants of a nameless kind
    are summoned out to seek and find
    (with maybe some telepathy)
    all spoilers of the human youth
    and garblers of the sacred truth


    deceivers, liers, self-fulfilled
    if left to us we'd have you grilled
    (and that for an eternity)
    on endless grace is what you've bet
    but chances are we'll get you yet


    pontification is your bent
    as if you think you're heaven sent
    (with great dilatability)
    in truth you're nothing but a cad
    your droning's bound to drive us mad


    in sects is where you've built your base
    a con job on the human race
    (preying on gullibility)
    in this food chain you've set your sights
    you're nothing more than parasites


    a curse upon your hated lot
    too insignificant to swat
    (it's ultraseriousity)
    your whiney noises irritate
    incessent buzzing we do hate


    compelled we are now to devise
    a mechanism of demise
    (with sheltered obviousity)
    to gather fools who congregate
    mistaken souls soon to be late


    your very nature is profane
    so function will design a bane
    (with irresistability)
    to capture using great appeal
    the poison God cares not to heal


    it's laced with negativity
    a twist of some divinity
    (of certain mootability)
    a deadend, none will get too far
    caught in a bottle or a jar


    it's murky by design, this pool
    a trap to capture any fool
    (with inescapability)
    so join with others of your kind
    all mired in liquid state of mind


    our entranceway that seems so sweet
    just disappears beneath your feet
    (a lewiscarrollosity)
    under the many watchful eye
    of Him the greatest dragonfly


    and looking back from where you fell
    into this mass of teeming hell
    (treading such mutability)
    heaven yet beckens, far away
    but rest assured you're here to stay




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      Wow!!! This poem speaks to things that are so true of our age. Religion is a human creation, making it imperfect and flawed. Thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2010-12-01 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem seems almost an affront to the constitutional fortitude out of good old fashioned american religion , (eg. unalienablely granted by God ) . How can we ask the children to believe in something we obviously 'psychokinesis' are not in possession of ? All that aside it still gives me hope and comfort when I consider I'm "here to stay" .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2010-09-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      A "lewiscarrollosity"! What a fantastic word creation!

    The garblers of sacred truth do indeed have a nasty surprise awaiting them at the gates.

    A clever rhyme with much meaning to be taken by those who will likely not listen.
    Bummer for them.


    Nicely done, Monk.
    I enjoy your spiritual forays, they have a lot of heart and just as much smart.
    | Posted on 2010-09-22 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      That voice speaking for this work is not of my kind, and such entities remain historically nameless. Just some good fun here.

    "Christian Israel" sounds very nice but if analyzed might be contradictory, basically combining "one who follows" Christ with "one who wrestles" with God. But then, I am often found guilty of over analyzing things.

    | Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Sects
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    we servants of a nameless kind


    Interesting! have a handle so to speak of this your kind?

    I am Christian Israel.

    joachim
    | Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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