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    dots Submission Name: Formless Memoriesdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsFormless Memoriesdots
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    The words that fall on silent ears
    From echo to numbness

    The unwilling blood of some ones past
    A vocal chord
    Memories with its tears and torn apart

    And from the burning rim of lashes
    Has slipped that choking gentle sigh
    Its resignation breathed
    To the deaf ears of silence, die

    To sleep, you wish, without the broken rape
    A reflection in its part
    A constant burden of you in your mirror

    Love, but hate the heart
    From echo to numbness

    Measures with its tears and torn apart




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