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    dots Submission Name: Mindset...dots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMindset...dots
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    I dont like maths..
    Ive never did.
    Well i use too..
    Now its burning in the pit...

    Ive given back most of my counting
    Preventing them from reflecting.
    The mathematical calculating,
    is totally not my thing...

    But now i have to pick it up,
    all the way from 6-foot below.
    I must learn to like it,
    even to love it more.

    Now that im teaching maths,
    i can hardly think,
    even my poem's out of rhyme.
    Hm... the connection just dosent click.




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