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    dots Submission Name: Your Forever Loveddots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Bytes: 306



    Description:
       This is a childish poem that i wrote, at least thats what i think. But at the time i wrote it was kool. (meaning i wrote it a LONG time ago)


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    dotsYour Forever Loveddots
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    The things we'd say
    The things we'd do
    I hope you know
    I still love you
    I said forever
    Just not with who
    But for the truth
    I still love you
    Same as for you
    Its new to me too
    But no matter what
    I'll ALWAYS love you!




    Submitted on 2004-07-26 16:17:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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