This is... amazing. It so wonderfully illustrates the confusion and longing and... honestly, I can relate to this.
It's kinda ironic... someone actually said "you are the only one who can..." etc. to me once and in the end made me feel like the first two stanzas... :/ you describe these impossible emotions really well. Although, IMHO, fourth stanza could be worded a bit differently?
Well done! Thank you. (:
Wow, I must say this really shows a lot of passion. I can just imagine the way that a person would feel if they got their heart ripped out like that, when it was never out just stabbed and the hole got bigger and bigger. I for one feel like how this poem is describing but it's not love that stabbed me, I don't know. Anyway great poem.
This is well written, and reflects feelings we have all had at one time or another. Love at once is responsible for the most exquisite of ecstacy in one instance, and the most numbing pain and loneliness in another!
Written with passion and feeling, as poetry is intended!
I like this, and i like the last line as well. This poem has great passion and pain behind it. Very well written and i wish you the best and I truly hope the sun starts to shine for you again...very soon. Cheers.