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    dots Submission Name: Love is scarydots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 370
    Average Vote:    0.0000
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    dotsLove is scarydots
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    Love is a Scary thing.
    it is the only thing that makes me hide.
    Hide from what i turthly want.
    Someone to be there
    when i cry.
    Someone to show me
    how being in love truely is.
    And months went by
    i had no hope
    in love at all.
    till just one day outta the blue.
    you made me feel differnt
    i wasnt just another girl to you
    we can relate in many ways.
    and both of us has felt the terriable pain.
    the pain neither of us would like to feel agian
    and now baby
    now that im with you
    you make me want to love again
    you make me want to face my fear
    and find that love
    i will cherish forever




    Submitted on 2010-09-26 14:08:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First off..you lucky duck being in love..claps to that and second I love this its beautiful
    | Posted on 2010-09-29 00:00:00 | by Alilia | [ Reply to This ]


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