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    dots Submission Name: I'm Headin Homedots
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    Author: Dawnyd
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 149/80/32
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    Description:
       The feeling of going home.


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    dotsI'm Headin Homedots
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    I'm Headin Home
    By Dawny D


    Vs 1

    Lookin for some time
    Time to be me
    Headin back home
    To my Knoxville Tennessee

    Vs 2

    Ridin through the hills
    Lookin back in time
    Rememberin the old days
    All the good times in my life

    Chorus

    There's nothing like the feelin
    Of goin back home
    Like callin an old friend
    Up on the phone
    There's no place I'd rather be
    Than right here
    In my Knoxville Tennessee

    Bridge

    Just one more turn
    I'm almost there
    I've got not one worry
    I've got not one care
    Cause there's no place I'd rather be
    Than right here
    In my Knoxville Tennessee


    Chorus

    There's nothing like the feelin
    Of goin back home
    Like callin an old friend
    Up on the phone
    There's no place I'd rather be
    Than right here
    In my Knoxville Tennessee


    This is the place
    The place that makes me feel so good
    I'd stay here forever, If only I could

    Cause there's no place I'd rather be
    Than right here
    In my Knoxville Tennessee














    Submitted on 2010-10-01 19:33:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There can be no place in this world like your HOME SWEET HOME. East or west home is the best. Your poem has made me nostalgic for my own home. One's home is like a Utopic world.
    | Posted on 2010-10-03 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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