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I'm Headin Home


Author: Dawnyd
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Words: 208
Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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The feeling of going home.


I'm Headin Home



I'm Headin Home
By Dawny D


Vs 1

Lookin for some time
Time to be me
Headin back home
To my Knoxville Tennessee

Vs 2

Ridin through the hills
Lookin back in time
Rememberin the old days
All the good times in my life

Chorus

There's nothing like the feelin
Of goin back home
Like callin an old friend
Up on the phone
There's no place I'd rather be
Than right here
In my Knoxville Tennessee

Bridge

Just one more turn
I'm almost there
I've got not one worry
I've got not one care
Cause there's no place I'd rather be
Than right here
In my Knoxville Tennessee


Chorus

There's nothing like the feelin
Of goin back home
Like callin an old friend
Up on the phone
There's no place I'd rather be
Than right here
In my Knoxville Tennessee


This is the place
The place that makes me feel so good
I'd stay here forever, If only I could

Cause there's no place I'd rather be
Than right here
In my Knoxville Tennessee














Submitted on 2010-10-01 19:33:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  There can be no place in this world like your HOME SWEET HOME. East or west home is the best. Your poem has made me nostalgic for my own home. One's home is like a Utopic world.
| Posted on 2010-10-03 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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