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I'm Leavin Him Today


Author: Dawnyd
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Words: 181
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Leaving a lover.


I'm Leavin Him Today



Vs 1

I saw him in the distance
and knew he didn't see
The pain and resistance
of the love he wouldn't keep

Vs 2

There he was with another
laughing and holding hands
through the lightning and the thunder
someone else was lovin on my man

Chorus

Well now he's won
Cause now I'm done
I'm leavin him today
don't matter what he'll say
The rain it's pouring down
and I, I won't be found
There are no more words left to say
Cause I'm leavin him today

Bridge

There's fire in my eyes
He's the reason why
There's no more tears left to cry

Chorus

Well now he's won
Cause now I'm done
I'm leavin him today
don't matter what he'll say
The rain it's pouring down
and I, I won't be found
There are no more words left to say
Cause I'm leaving him today

Tag

There is no more pretending
That this love isn't ending
There's no more words left to say
I'm leavin him today




Submitted on 2010-10-01 20:47:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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