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    dots Submission Name: Quiescent Nirvanadots
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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsQuiescent Nirvanadots
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    Whispers encased in crimson lilacs
    I used to hear them.
    Fatigued but not weary-obscure in all but nature-
    Their nature was to grow.

    Taunts and backlash,
    Spreading through the red wine vines
    What a quiescent nirvana-
    not a note louder than deep perpetual silence

    On the smooth velvet of hostility, lie two broken letters;
    Until they fall underneath the ground,
    With the rest of things better left unsaid.




    Submitted on 2010-10-03 19:32:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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