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    dots Submission Name: For His Wedding Daydots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 570
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    Description:
       This is for my best friend,
    May you always have happiness in your life,
    Always remember you will have it with me.
    I am proud of you for not forgetting how to love,
    And most of all for moving on,
    You are the best, for you are my friend.
    Good Luck and Be Good!


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    dotsFor His Wedding Daydots
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    Listen here to this romance to be portrayed.
    Yesterday, oh so many countless years past,
    Two souls touched then became dear friends.
    In their innocence they had fallen in love,
    Honoring the friendship, the desire lingered still.
    Over the years, infliction invaded one friends heart,
    The other friend rendered comfort to the one in pain.
    In that comfort their love started to whisper.
    So softly and with so much tenderness.
    Friends forever discovered something heavenly.
    These friends found a love so irreplaceable,
    However life was unjust and decisions were made.
    These two lovers as well as friends separated ways.
    Time past by along with years saturated with tears.
    Tragedy discovered its way back in to these hearts.
    Like true soul-mates react, one heart found the other.
    Therefore these hearts healed each other once again,
    As enchanting and pure as this romance seemed to be,
    Once again the lovers cast each other free.
    Clearly in love but never truly intended to remain.
    Years went by over and over again and again,
    With distance between the love nevertheless there.
    One heart proposed to settle with second best,
    While the other found another heart in need.
    Now with quickness in these hearts they shatter.
    These hearts know it is for the best for the second best.
    These two hearts, these two souls, they were meant to be.
    They were meant to met, meant to love,
    But destined to be apart, but in love till the end.




    Submitted on 2010-10-04 11:17:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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