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    Author: 13thprotector
    ASL Info:    15/male/atlanta,tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 28/23/40
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsAgaindots
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    We all set sights,
    as well as one another
    or like yourself
    and your brother,
    but we reach the heights
    only to find hell.

    When we climb up,
    we climb down
    far more down that up,
    and the down is fire
    the up ice.

    The bardo is reserved,
    for the highest
    and many fall
    their spirit battered and broken,
    and down and down
    as demons gnaw on their bodies,
    and rape their gods
    only one stands up
    and tries again.

    Only one climbs,
    to the highest,
    to save the lowest,
    and in the end
    all is dead
    and ghosts live.




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