Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

So Much is this Life


Author: concrete_rose
ASL Info:    31/f/nc
Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 43 /52 /34
Words: 130
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 1303
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 865



Description:




So Much is this Life



Times fated events unwind,
into a sea of uncertainty,
a knock at the heart's door-
a remnant of the past,
mean't for shocking instability;
of the small bliss attained
in the time which we stand alone.

What is the meaning of all this?
The surfacing of hidden emotions,
supposedly locked away in vaults,
the guilt of the young life, decisions made blindly-blinded by love in the darkest degree.

"If it could go wrong it will"
Is that not the truest of avenues?
Does that not apply to the pyramid of thorns
prickling the blood from this heart
falling inevitably to the floor?

When shall the darkness lift, the sun to shine upon this soul,
the memories are so much, so much is this life.

-B




Submitted on 2010-10-06 00:34:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  everything really flowed very nicely, and you def keep the reader guessing. good write
| Posted on 2010-10-08 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



187271