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    dots Submission Name: The Lamentdots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Got bored one day and just scribbled my thoughts on paper... (:


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    dotsThe Lamentdots
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    The Lament.

    I believe that people should not play guitar because they can.
    They should play because they want to.
    --Strum from the heart, not the head.

    I believe that religion is too controversial.
    I won’t write about it.
    --Believe if you want, but don’t look at me for help.

    I believe that people are too complicated.
    Don’t talk to them.
    --Immerse yourself in nature’s surroundings.

    I believe that time takes too long.
    Writing takes a long time.
    --Slow down and take it all in.

    I believe that fears aren’t irrational.
    It’s not my fault I fear for the ones I love.
    --It’s not the thing you fear; it’s the fear of the thing.

    I believe that the night is not full of darkness.
    It’s just giving someone on the other side some light.
    --It isn’t always the cause that affects you.

    I believe that love is in fact another word for infatuation.
    I looked in a thesaurus.
    --Books are so clever, they enlighten me.

    I believe that life goes slow, quickly.
    How frustrating!
    --Don’t wait. It will never happen if you do.

    I believe that clichés are so overrated.
    Is that why I wrote this?
    --Hey it’s your life: be an anti-cliché, act purple and don’t take crap from other people.

    You only get one shot at living. It’s up to you.




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      how true my dear but it's you have posted this you are reaching out with true uniqeness that is your uniquely
    | Posted on 2010-11-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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