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    dots Submission Name: Freeflow Hydroeconomicsdots

    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 317
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 684
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 2026


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    dotsFreeflow Hydroeconomicsdots

    I've got my feelings fettered to this arrangement,
    a lover boy, with a higher heart than other sane men
    but the same men, they'd call me a lunatic for my faith and
    I'll disregard every order they've given me for engagement
    launch my missles, blast my name into the pavement,
    to get my piece of the pie, an overdue payment
    owed by the world for my years until today and
    maybe one day they'll construct a statue in my name.

    I see all my fans, they're fanning me here standing
    hotter than the desert where they filmed the lunar landing
    I keep to the grind, like dead keeps to the casket
    my guns are long arms, so I bet they'll keep on blasting
    just got fired up, I'm still rattatata-tating,
    I've got big dreams, that means they're longer lasting.

    I've got big lungs,
    that means I puff and pass it,
    kush clouds fit for kings,
    wait, hold on let me ash it,
    roll them thicker than my wrist
    use Swishers, cause I'm classic
    I'm a predator by nature,
    so prey will get they ass kicked,
    no doubt now, this shit just got Jurassic
    take a bite out of the game,
    crunch like a Vlassic
    my diploma's on the wall,
    a plaque they framed in plastic,
    spent too long off of the job,
    but employment's all elastic.

    I blow trees to calm my nerves,
    so that I dont blow a gasket,
    you may not walk my path
    but please respect my tactics
    my personal independence is promised
    I stand for me before the masses
    my rights are long established
    I have freedom to my passion.

    I've got big dreams,
    that means they're longer lasting
    I've got big lungs,
    that means I puff and pass it,
    Im a king of the common class,
    so I made this shit pro-active.

    Submitted on 2010-10-07 17:43:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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