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    dots Submission Name: hells fire dots

    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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       this one is by my little sister tell me if its good or not thanks.

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    dotshells fire dots

    death under and all around like vampires dancing around in the ground hells fire burning killing what ever comes in its path mealting the skin of a boy crying for his last breath but never to return in his place.

    Submitted on 2010-10-08 08:08:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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