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Submission Name: fire pit of hell dots

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Author:	muizode
Elite Ratio:	1.36 - 1/4/4
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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fire pit of hell dots

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the fire pit of hell the smell of burning flech in the air the skin of a man the sound of the man yelling and hopeing to live but knows he has reached his last life and dies on a short notice how and why does this happon only the devil knows.

Submitted on 2010-10-08 08:33:03 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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very good but you have some missake
| Posted on 2010-10-08 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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