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    dots Submission Name: All Grown Updots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAll Grown Updots
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    Has our loved been untainted?
    Locked away only to resurface untouched?
    We are all grown up now
    But the feelings exist just as much

    Were the occasional thoughts of you over the years a precursor?
    Thoughts accurate like a fine tuned violin
    Our previous experiences prepared us for this moment
    Make us appreciate what resides within

    Yes, we are all grown up now
    Doesn’t it seem like this new take on life just fell in our lap?
    Like grandma holding a newborn in her rocking chair
    This fable will be mentioned around many dinner tables




    Submitted on 2010-10-11 15:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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