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All Grown Up

Author: Cayman
ASL Info:    31
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Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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All Grown Up

Has our loved been untainted?
Locked away only to resurface untouched?
We are all grown up now
But the feelings exist just as much

Were the occasional thoughts of you over the years a precursor?
Thoughts accurate like a fine tuned violin
Our previous experiences prepared us for this moment
Make us appreciate what resides within

Yes, we are all grown up now
Doesn’t it seem like this new take on life just fell in our lap?
Like grandma holding a newborn in her rocking chair
This fable will be mentioned around many dinner tables

Submitted on 2010-10-11 15:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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