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    dots Submission Name: Not like you cared.dots
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    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNot like you cared.dots
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    I am dying inside,
    yet you can't seem to see,
    that all of the pain is because
    you left me to be.

    Pretend what you wish
    but i know what is real,
    that the past is what mattered
    and the present is not a big deal.

    I have yet to be who I am,
    not that you ever will care,
    all those tears that you never noticed
    were because I was scared so i didn't dare.




    Submitted on 2010-10-11 20:09:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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