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    dots Submission Name: You taught medots
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    Author: cherrywillow
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    dotsYou taught medots
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    I wish i could say,
    that everything is okay.
    I can lie and pretend,
    but you'll see anyways.

    That all lies are turned to truth.
    It may take time but it will be known
    that you have done me wrong and that
    we were two people who were never meant to cross paths.

    Yet in this unsettling thought
    i have learned from you to hold myself together
    while others try to drag me down, that tears are only tears,
    and pain can last a life time.

    You taught me that it is possible,
    that dreams can be haunted by the past.
    that we can relive every hit and scream,
    If we truly have the heart to go through it again.

    I learned that I could cry for hours,
    regretting all those times i let you have your way.
    Every time i didn't fight back
    because you had me scared.

    But you taught me what it is
    truly like to lose, but I have sworn
    that if our paths cross once again
    I know your every flaw, I'm ready to win.

    So make your move.




    Submitted on 2010-10-11 20:18:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this quite metaphorical even if your angry i understand this from first hand experience
    | Posted on 2010-11-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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