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    dots Submission Name: The Electric Musedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Electric Musedots
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    A vivid flash of light - an ecstatic voice speaking of grand ambitions.
    It could of been the autumn rush of colors in her eyes- Almond and full of delight--- That made me see a beautiful fire beneath.
    Burning away




    Submitted on 2010-10-12 19:25:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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