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    dots Submission Name: absurd american appetitesdots
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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsabsurd american appetitesdots
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    beautiful barbarians bellow blissful blasphemy below barred banners
    delightfully depraved delegates deliberately dumb down debates
    fabulous filth fills fake franchise factories faking fun facts
    terrifically talented tabloid talk takes tolerance to total taxation
    epic empire edits ersatz ellections
    wonderfully wicked wanton war wanders westward while weak willed washinton watches within white washed walls
    clever congress continuously cause catastrophe claiming careful consideration




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