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Submission Name:
absurd american appetites
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Author:
chiderpop
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absurd american appetites
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beautiful barbarians bellow blissful blasphemy below barred banners
delightfully depraved delegates deliberately dumb down debates
fabulous filth fills fake franchise factories faking fun facts
terrifically talented tabloid talk takes tolerance to total taxation
epic empire edits ersatz ellections
wonderfully wicked wanton war wanders westward while weak willed washinton watches within white washed walls
clever congress continuously cause catastrophe claiming careful consideration
Submitted on 2010-10-12 20:22:04
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