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Submission Name:
thirty lone bars
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Author:
chiderpop
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0.97 - 0/0/13
Words:
105
Class/Type:
Poetry/Death
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thirty lone bars
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A man lies dead
beyond the stars
nomore is to blame
but for 30 lone bars
its been fun
he said with a grin
living this life,
a life of sin
he swallowed them down
without a word
and slowly enough
his vision blurred
his mind was swimming
soon to sink
its been fun
was all he could think
he lied down to die
smile on his face
a human life
is a great thing to waste
he lived fast
beyond the stars
his life was taken
by 30 lone bars
Submitted on 2010-10-12 20:26:36
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