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    dots Submission Name: thirty lone barsdots
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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    A man lies dead
    beyond the stars
    nomore is to blame
    but for 30 lone bars

    its been fun
    he said with a grin
    living this life,
    a life of sin

    he swallowed them down
    without a word
    and slowly enough
    his vision blurred

    his mind was swimming
    soon to sink
    its been fun
    was all he could think

    he lied down to die
    smile on his face
    a human life
    is a great thing to waste

    he lived fast
    beyond the stars
    his life was taken
    by 30 lone bars




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