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Submission Name: thirty lone bars dots

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Author:	chiderpop
Elite Ratio:	0.97 - 0/0/13
Words:	105

Class/Type:	Poetry/Death
Total Views:	435
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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thirty lone bars dots

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A man lies dead
beyond the stars
nomore is to blame
but for 30 lone bars

its been fun
he said with a grin
living this life,
a life of sin

he swallowed them down
without a word
and slowly enough
his vision blurred

his mind was swimming
soon to sink
its been fun
was all he could think

he lied down to die
smile on his face
a human life
is a great thing to waste

he lived fast
beyond the stars
his life was taken
by 30 lone bars

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