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    dots Submission Name: little guysdots
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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Limerick/Comedy
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    dotslittle guysdots
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    i enjoy drawing stick men
    a chance to play god
    i make them all different
    do you find this odd

    some have a smile
    and some have a frown
    once for a laugh
    i drew a clown

    i draw some on their knees
    deep in prayer
    while others just stand
    with a blank stare

    i own an army
    of tiny men
    they all come alive
    with a flick of my pen




    Submitted on 2010-10-12 20:30:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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