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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotseverythingdots
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    well i cant stop thinkin of you

    in a world of lies

    youre all thats true



    your smile is the sun liftin up my soul

    in a world of wonder

    youre all i know



    you make me beleive in the god above

    in a world of hate

    youre all i love



    your life is a story that i get to read

    in a world of wants

    youre all i need



    youre the one bright beacon shining in the night

    in a world of wrong

    youre all thats right




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