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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Comedy
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    simple thoughts do plague me

    certain ones the most

    if sliced bread is so perfect

    then why is there toast



    silly little wonders

    inside my mind

    we are all so evil

    yet still mankind



    questions are answers

    theyre just undercover

    indians where here first

    so what did columbus discover



    well cracker jacks are fun

    but maybe theyre racist

    and holes cant be whole

    cause theyre all empty spaces



    just like books cant read

    so do they all hate each other

    cause they judge one another

    by whats drawn on their cover






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