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    dots Submission Name: the fingerdots

    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsthe fingerdots

    blame it on the sunshine

    that i saw in your eyes

    blame it on the way

    i believed all your little lies

    ill blame it on my heart

    you can blame it on your soul

    but we dont wanna blame the river

    its not its fault that it flows

    she blamed it on the drink

    for bringing us together

    and i blamed it on the moon

    for the night that i met her

    blame it on mars

    for the battles that we fought

    but i cant blame it on the market

    for all the shit that i bought

    its all probably my fault

    that much we know is true

    but no matter what happened

    baby i blame it all on you

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