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Submission Name: the finger dots

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Author:	chiderpop
Elite Ratio:	0.97 - 0/0/13
Words:	158

Class/Type:	Poetry/Venting
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the finger dots

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blame it on the sunshine

that i saw in your eyes

blame it on the way

i believed all your little lies

ill blame it on my heart

you can blame it on your soul

but we dont wanna blame the river

its not its fault that it flows

she blamed it on the drink

for bringing us together

and i blamed it on the moon

for the night that i met her

blame it on mars

for the battles that we fought

but i cant blame it on the market

for all the shit that i bought

its all probably my fault

that much we know is true

but no matter what happened

baby i blame it all on you

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