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Submission Name:
the finger
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Author:
chiderpop
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158
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Poetry/Venting
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the finger
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blame it on the sunshine
that i saw in your eyes
blame it on the way
i believed all your little lies
ill blame it on my heart
you can blame it on your soul
but we dont wanna blame the river
its not its fault that it flows
she blamed it on the drink
for bringing us together
and i blamed it on the moon
for the night that i met her
blame it on mars
for the battles that we fought
but i cant blame it on the market
for all the shit that i bought
its all probably my fault
that much we know is true
but no matter what happened
baby i blame it all on you
Submitted on 2010-10-12 20:36:31
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