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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    wanna fly high

    just wanna be free

    or do i just wanna chance

    to truly be me



    cant look at myself

    afraid of what i'll see

    every time i come close

    i just turn and flee



    i close my eyes

    and remember all my dreams

    turned into nightmares

    and always full of screams



    wanna get some hope

    but none can be found

    the worst failure of all

    is when you let yourself down






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