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    Author: chiderpop
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    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    o sleepless nights

    you are fired

    i dont need you anymore

    for i am tired



    its been fun

    ill say that much

    but now i need

    a pillows sweet touch



    these neon lights

    offer no protection

    from a drink induced

    self reflection



    tonight ill take

    my dream book from the shelf

    and see if i can't

    share a few with myself



    in the morning ill finally feel

    a little better than dead

    ill preview heaven

    in the middle of my bed




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