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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsget goingdots
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    today i think

    ill wear a smile

    if only for

    a little while



    anger is nice

    but its getting old

    the day is too warm

    for me to be cold



    we'll tell stories of when

    we were in school

    and laugh at the times

    we tried to be cool



    we can hop in a car

    and go for a trip

    and i can get rid of my

    stiff upper lip



    hope is only

    an hour away

    lets drive there now

    and spend the day






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