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    dots Submission Name: realisticdots
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    Author: chiderpop
    Elite Ratio:    0.97 - 0/0/13
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsrealisticdots
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    i slept through today

    tomorrow do the same

    waiting with no worries

    without any shame



    unsure of life

    atleast right now

    its much better

    in my dreams anyhow



    the grass is always green

    and the sky is blue

    the best part of all

    i pretend im with you



    my imaginary prison

    it keeps me free

    go where ever i want

    when youre with me




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