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    dots Submission Name: But whydots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBut whydots
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    But why are you mad
    I told you the truth
    The month has not even went by
    I can not be in love with you.
    You say im the only one
    but why
    why is the love for me so insanily much
    i love you
    but im not in love with you
    and now mad.
    mad at the truth.
    but i love you
    but not like you do me
    but baby please dont break the
    what can we be?




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