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    dots Submission Name: Open minded Decidedots
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    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    7-5-82/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.58 - 283/221/121
    Words: 21
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsOpen minded Decidedots
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    Deception enters



    The mind that’s left wide open



    Not worth the danger




    Submitted on 2010-10-16 11:35:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      closed doors are safe
    the unknown is kept at bay
    so is the sunlight
    | Posted on 2010-10-16 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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