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KimDay


Author: MyWorld
ASL Info:    21/M/IN
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76 /99 /87
Words: 66
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I haven't submitted anything here in a really long time. If anyone cares, I'm still writing. I'm putting together some songs, though, so, I'm keeping it to myself. This is a poem about a long lost ex.


KimDay


You hurt me.
But, time heals all wounds,
And, I still think of you every time I see the scars..
I fervently yearn for you
Wandering my mind's bleak halls
Looking up and wishing you could see these stars..
Suffice to say, I've burnt for you
But, mine are feelings that were always true
So, I'm but a piece, without the synchronicity of our beating hearts..




Submitted on 2010-10-16 22:24:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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