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    dots Submission Name: KimDaydots
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    Author: MyWorld
    ASL Info:    21/M/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76/99/87
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 494
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 426



    Description:
       I haven't submitted anything here in a really long time. If anyone cares, I'm still writing. I'm putting together some songs, though, so, I'm keeping it to myself. This is a poem about a long lost ex.


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    dotsKimDaydots
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    You hurt me.
    But, time heals all wounds,
    And, I still think of you every time I see the scars..
    I fervently yearn for you
    Wandering my mind's bleak halls
    Looking up and wishing you could see these stars..
    Suffice to say, I've burnt for you
    But, mine are feelings that were always true
    So, I'm but a piece, without the synchronicity of our beating hearts..




    Submitted on 2010-10-16 22:24:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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