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    dots Submission Name: 3rd.dots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 432
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    Had me right from the start
    then you cheated...and lost my heart
    I never had a chance




    Submitted on 2010-10-17 22:43:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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