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    dots Submission Name: 4thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    You tried to save me
    You only hurt me
    I never knew about you
    until you left me




    Submitted on 2010-10-17 22:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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